Thank you to everyone that offered feedback from my first elevator pitch. The feedback that I received was positive and encouraging. This increased my confidence and allowed me to perform well on this elevator pitch as well.
Since all my responses were positive I did not have any feedback that recommended that I change anything.
Cameron,
ReplyDeleteYou did an excellent job with your pitch. You were well spoken and did a good job expressing your thoughts. I see those types of sinks all of the time but never in homes. If you want to check out mine the link is attached.
http://tgbentrepreneurshipblog.blogspot.com/2016/02/elevator-pitch-2.html
Cameron,
ReplyDeleteYou have noticeable confidence in your pitch and have solid posture -- a useful skill for public speaking. While I have seen those sinks commercially, I believe targeting the household market can be a strong tool to build your brand because the purchaser will essentially be modeling/demonstrating your product for their network (anybody who visits the purchaser's house). Regarding feedback, while you do have your confidence and posture down well, I believe being more physically expressive by adding hand gestures will engage your audience even further. Nonetheless, good work on the pitch and I look forward to seeing your success.
I have attached the link to my pitch and I would really appreciate your feedback and suggestions.
http://dipaoloent.blogspot.com/2016/02/elevator-pitch-no-2.html
Best of Luck,
Louis DiPaolo Jr.