All of my feedback was very positive.
The one suggestion that I received was that I should add more hand gestures. I attempted to add some hand motions and gestures to my pitch this go around.
Hi, Cameron! I like your idea and think it would be great for peoples' kitchens. Even the faucets that work with by tapping them can still end up getting dirty. I thought your pitch was good, I liked how you included hand gestures. I'm not sure if it's the video quality or my computer, but it was a little hard to hear you at times. Other than that, I think you made a good pitch. Here's the link to mine: http://hmilam95.blogspot.com/2016/03/elevator-pitch-no-3.html
Hey Cameron! I really like your idea. I think it is very unique and something that could benefit a lot of people around the world in a positive way. I just think it might take time to implement as so many people would have to replace their kitchen appliances. Great job with your pitch! If you want to check mine out here’s the link: http://charlysbizblog.blogspot.com/2016/03/elevator-pitch-no-3.html
Cameron, Your idea was pretty cool. Your dress was confident, tone was good, and the hand gestures really helped me to stay more engaged. I wonder if having some catchier phrasing would help bring the listener in more? Being catchy but not hoaky is a great way to make yourself more appealing and more fun. People want to do business with people they like, it's strangely important.
Hi, Cameron! I like your idea and think it would be great for peoples' kitchens. Even the faucets that work with by tapping them can still end up getting dirty. I thought your pitch was good, I liked how you included hand gestures. I'm not sure if it's the video quality or my computer, but it was a little hard to hear you at times. Other than that, I think you made a good pitch. Here's the link to mine: http://hmilam95.blogspot.com/2016/03/elevator-pitch-no-3.html
ReplyDeleteHey Cameron! I really like your idea. I think it is very unique and something that could benefit a lot of people around the world in a positive way. I just think it might take time to implement as so many people would have to replace their kitchen appliances. Great job with your pitch! If you want to check mine out here’s the link: http://charlysbizblog.blogspot.com/2016/03/elevator-pitch-no-3.html
ReplyDeleteCameron,
ReplyDeleteYour idea was pretty cool. Your dress was confident, tone was good, and the hand gestures really helped me to stay more engaged. I wonder if having some catchier phrasing would help bring the listener in more? Being catchy but not hoaky is a great way to make yourself more appealing and more fun. People want to do business with people they like, it's strangely important.